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The ocean is calm and peaceful
Sitting on the sun warmed rocks
Watching the gulls soaring overhead
Shriek to each other in friendly banter

My toes sink into the velvet sand
A wave crashes to shore in a friendly embrace
The sun pulls the ocean over its head like a blanket
In a brilliant red and orange radiance

The soft wind tangles with my hair
Giving me a hug goodbye
As I walk home
Off the golden beach
©2007-2009 ~AthenasQuill
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Author's Comments

another one...^^;
The picture is not mine. It's from clipart XD I just messed with it a little bit to make it a little different. But it's the one that goes with my poem...i guess it inspired it...>>

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:iconbluedragon101:
it was very good, but
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ADD IN UR DRAWN PIX'S!!!!
they're really good and other people need to see that! ^_^

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BANZAI!!
:iconathenasquill:
how?!
i dont have a scanner!! ><
unless....you invite me over
*nudgenudge*
teehee X3
but thank you :hug:

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I could be your BIGGEST FAN! but I'm too lazy.

You're just jealous because I can act like a retard in public and people still love me! :D
:iconbluedragon101:
i should... shouldnt i?
...
i will soon ^_^.. er someday
lol
ur welcome!!
:glomp:

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BANZAI!!
:iconathenasquill:
:heart:

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I could be your BIGGEST FAN! but I'm too lazy.

You're just jealous because I can act like a retard in public and people still love me! :D
:iconem0strawberry:
=D Once again!!! :hug:

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"that was fun" 8)
:iconbluedragon101:
:winner:
Everyones a winner!

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BANZAI!!
:iconathenasquill:
EEE!! :heart: :glomp: :heart:

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I could be your BIGGEST FAN! but I'm too lazy.

You're just jealous because I can act like a retard in public and people still love me! :D
:iconem0strawberry:
=D

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"that was fun" 8)
:iconelmigo:
you're so good in literature !!!!! I was read your poems ... really you're fantastic , great feelings , great person ... be careful sweetie , I'm back again , ready to work !!!
see you soon
be so so happy ,sweetie !!

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